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sounds pretty good!

I wonder if this is your first full song. Sounds pretty basic but still really good. Considering you're using FL, I am too, so on such an account, I'm adding yours to my favorites to see which one of us has more of a taking to. Also, I was wondering what day you submitted this?

luckystrikes23 responds:

Submitted last night. It was one of my first songs, I lost a bunch in a hard drive wipe a while back, and this was one of the few I was able to keep.

D-A-M-N G-O-O-D!

Not only is it a rather decent song, but..considering it's not professionally done, the vocals lining up with the music is awesome timing. She could probably warm up for a couple of hours beforehand if you redo it (there's moments she sounds nervous, either with timing or an off tone), but otherwise dont change anything about it! If anything, I''ll be waiting for another submission. Keep up the great work!

kiwiaddict responds:

yeah about the shaky voice, i honestly dont know what it is. okay maybe its cause its unprofessionally recorded... if you put on earphones.... it SHOULD sound fine. i think it has to do with the uncompressedness... thanks so much for the comment tho. i really appreciate it.

Different, I'll give you that much

Very confusing. It's kinda nice, but doesnt really serve a purpose. Honestly, I dont think it would fall under any electronica genre. The beat is the only thing that would really allow that, but I'd have to place it under Easy Listening, personally. ...kinda catchy though!

By the by, you submitted this..what, today? And you say uploading takes forever. I've been waiting about 2 or 3 days for my 1st submission to go through. -.- ..still nothing. If you care to look for it, it's The Nimbus Races. It probably wont be out by the end of the weekend though. At least i'm not expecting it

Toddzilla20000 responds:

True enough on the purpose, it's kind of the style I've taken up accidentally in my attempts to comprehend Reason 4 as well as composition. I'd just like to make a form of progressive dance that doesn't sound like freakin deadmau5, though the progressive part is taking time to, uh.. Progress ^_^;;

I managed to go through half of the levels in gunbot before I tried reloading the page, sometimes newgrounds uploaded gets sticky :P I'd gladly check yours out though!

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you found it interesting :)

Well written

It sounds great. Through and through. The change in octive about 2/3 in is an excellent time to do so. Towards the end though, it sounds REALLY classical style. I cant quite place it, but something from the Stravinsky frame. Perhaps something like Beethoven's 5th Symphony? Has just enough of that touch, but it's a brilliant piece! 5/5 10/10!

FightingFire responds:

Thanks! I actually did try to emulate Beethoven's style with the last motif, especially at the C# Ab7 B A arpeggiated chord progression. Great job noticing it!

Sounds great

A bit of work to be done

Between 2:00 and 2:25, for example, sounds like you got bored with it and tried to change it up but it didn't come out too good.

each time, with the reintroduction of the piano, it started sounding good again. Overall, it has a sense of Castlevania to it and a really nice retarding at the end. it suited the end very well.

DreamEater responds:

thank you very much for your spot-on review,
you read me like a book here BurnSith ^^;;
maybe i'll consider a second version in the future >O<

~Dj Sonik

Sounds fun!

Ok, has massive potential! I suggest you clone it to make it twice as long, then go back through, put something either in the middle or close to it, change up the second half some to make it different from the first half, but GOD keep the beat! Totally catchy! I'm Still waiting for my first entry to get done, and all of mine started off short like this. I think i have a few under 2.5 minutes, but none of them sound this good! Keep going! Show us what you can do when you really try! ^_^

seargenthippo responds:

Thanks! Will do!

First off, I live my life by the note. You dont have to love it, but then again I dont have to care if you love it. So long as it's satisfying people musically, and my friends do say it's good, then that's all I care about. I'm always up for criticism too

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